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You donít know whatís missing
You donít know what youíre looking for
You canít find a way out of the grief

This cycle called depression
Your wrists are stained red
Your mind is stained black
Your heart is deteriating
Into the black hole of nothingness
That has formed inside of you

There is nothing that can cure it
There is nothing
That will ever be able to tear the pain out
Nothing will save you
Nothing will love you
Nothing will kill you
And end this eternal pain that youíre going through
Nothing will save you

This cycle called depression
Your wrists are stained red
Your mind is stained black
Your heart is deteriating
Into the black hole of nothingness
That has formed inside of you

The only known cure for this pain is to be put in a box
But you canít do what is necessary
To be in that box

This cycle called depression
Your wrists are stained red
Your mind is stained black
Your heart is deteriating
Into the black hole of nothingness
That has formed inside of you

What is missing?
What is missing?
What is missing?

This cycle called depression
Your wrists are stained red
Your mind is stained black
Your heart is deteriating
Into the black hole of nothingness
That has formed inside of you

What is missing?!
anutha 1 that i just wrote randomli
again skrolin thru the older stuff
this must b a cupl of years old at least
i think i wanted 2 sum up depression, but 2 b honest ther is no way 2 sum up a feeling, let alone 1 thats is so deepli cast in2 the mind that its all u kno
so... *shrugs* i duno... just giv it a chance
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MoRthreD-XX Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
so true.
you may be happy an hour, the next you feel like a dementor is right beside yooou!
You may have 'everything', but THE something is always missing and keeps reminding you.
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PepperyPenguin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I completely agree. One time in Engliish class, I was reading "Argous" from the Odessy. I couldn't stop crying. I guess that the something that is missing is my happiness.
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Primigirl Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
extremely emotional and very well written. i like how you made it almost like a song, with that repeating chorus. i think it's something almost everyone suffering through depression can relate to. at least, in the beginning when you still have enough strength to wonder and demand from someone what IS missing. great job
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KuroiAmeKami Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
This was just amazing....

...thank you

... this is just describing so many thoughts past and present.

....Tears of joy
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MemberofMadness Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student Writer
Yes, yes, yes, yes.... *wipes away tear* Thank you for writing this. It's wonderful.
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ActiveBirdS Featured By Owner May 18, 2011   Writer
Nice. Emotional in so many descriptions.
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Lucinda-lulu Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
thank you :) and thanks for the fav
I think ths is my firs comment in a couple of years!!! so mega thank yous :)
xx
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ActiveBirdS Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011   Writer
Yeah, absolutely NP.
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Lucinda-lulu Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011
thatnks to everyone who has favourited this so far, I would thank you all individually but Id be here all night lol
not sure what you like about it but thnk you anyway
xx
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babymama90 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2008
Well I think you've summed up depression pretty well. Good job.
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